Second Draft of Final Music Video

Here is a copy of our second draft for our music video to the song "New York City" by The Chainsmokers:

https://youtu.be/XLgVNqtle_4 

Focus Group Feedback:

Phoebe: "I think the girls have made this video look really cool and it is getting better and better! The corrections which were needed after the first draft have been made, there is some refining to go but the concept is definitely there."

James: "The quality of the second draft is a lot higher than the first. I really like the transitions used and the reversed sequences. I like the fact they've gone off path from their plans in order to avoid continuity issues as I think is shows how versatile they are as a group."

Alex: "This is still completely different to the storyboard but it works. The girls have obviously worked hard and spent time on fixing the issues and I like that they keep putting new ideas in there. I think it is almost at completion but will look even better with refinement."

Scarlett: "It was a promising first draft and an even better second draft. The audio goes with the visuals and you can see that links are being made. I am really glad the jumpy cuts have been fixed and the music video is more visually enjoyable now."

Ben: "I really love the emotions Phoebe is portraying in the music video and it goes really well with the song. The whole concept works really well and I really look forward to seeing how the final product turns out."

Personal Reflection:

"I like this draft even better as we have fixed a lot of the issues we faced and were left with in the first draft. I like that the transitions make viewing a lot smoother and more enjoyable. I really like the reversed footage as I think it successfully shows a reflective theme which occurs in the video. We still have to fix a couple of issues and make the overall quality a lot more refined, but it is definitely near completion and is on the right track."