Audience Pitch Feedback

Here is some feedback from our class members regarding the pitch we gave them, we also received some feedback from our media teacher.

Megan: "Sufficient detail throughout and liked the costume idea and digipak drawings. Explanation of locations are very clear and can see that there is a journey taking place throughout the music video through the locations."

Simran: "Sufficient detail throughout, backed up points with images etc. I thought the digipak drawings were very detailed with everything explained well. Main idea is explained very well and can't wait to see what the end/final product looks like."

Mr Kerrigan:
"I really like your song choice; I agree with you that there are lots of possibilities for this song.
The fact that EDM music videos do not tend to feature the artist(s), and that they often employ narratives that are unrelated to the lyrics, could be an advantage. I, personally, prefer it when the narrative of a music video is related to the lyrics; looking at your animatic, this shouldn’t be a problem.
I like the idea for your music video; given your comparatively limited means, I think it strikes the balance of being both interesting and achievable. As you have correctly noted, EDM videos often involve some sort of connection to a club; I think that the idea of tracking your actress in the run up to a night out is a great idea. Make sure that you make your links between the content of the music video and the lyrics obvious to your audience.
Your ideas for your actress’s clothing make sense.
Your locations are well researched."
Your animatic was easy to follow; I feel have a good idea of what you are attempting to achieve.
I’m looking forward to see how you execute it."